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Son of a Gun
Author: velvetglove
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(Added on Mar 3, 2007)
(This month 66819 readers) (Total 90618 readers) |
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A three-part story set in both the mid-nineteenth century and the present day, recounting the tale of two young ladies at the mercy of a desperate ship’s crew stranded on a desert island. The parts will all be posted over the next few days. (M/f, M+/f, BDSM, historical, nc, slow, serious). |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
archetype
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Mar 5, 2007 |
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Good start. I like your writing style. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Mar 5, 2007)
- Thank you, archetype. I have submitted Part Two and will submit Part Three and a complete Version tomorrow. I regret splitting the story into three postings as it was already finished and would, I think, have retained the thread better without the delays. Regards, Velvetglove
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| Reviewer:
manwitdog
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Mar 3, 2007 |
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develope it more by having the women pay for food with their bodies enventually becoming the island whores, but reduce the number of men on the island
(7/10)
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