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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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what stories should be like (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Jun 19, 2005 |
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Wonderful. A major upgrade from the riginal, which was excellent in itself. Thanks. Look forward to the other story on Lisa. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
gillian
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Nov 13, 2003 |
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Absolutely fantastic. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ebodamen
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Oct 27, 2002 |
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nice story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Oct 3, 2001 |
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A bit mild for my tastes, but certainly well written. The one major problem, and it's a killer, is the fact that Lisa comes across as too weak to be interesting. Try giving her some kind of a spine in future installments. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
ownedgirl
(Edit) (Oct 3, 2001)
- tHIS IS MOST PROBABLY AN ABUSE OF THIS FORMAT, HOWEVER IT IS MY ONLY CHANCE TO TELL YOU THAT YOUR REVIEWS ARE VERY MUCH APPRECIATED!! ALTHOUGH AT TIMES YOUR ' BITE ' IS A BIT HARSH, ESPECIALLY TO NEW OR FIRST TIME WRITERS, WHAT CANNOT BE REBUTTED IS YOUR LOVE FOR THE LANGUAGE AND THE DESIRE THAT IT BE USED PROPERLY IN THE WRITTEN FORM, AND EVEN MORE EVIDENT IS YOUR TOTAL PASSION FOR THE ENTIRE GENRE. I NOW FIND MYSELF, FIRST CHECKING FOR YOUR REVIEW BEFORE BOTHERING TO READ A STORY... KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK HYPHEN666 !!
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| Reviewer:
ownedgirl
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Oct 1, 2001 |
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A very nice effort in the continuation of another writers original story. Don't know if this is a first effort at writing or not. If it is, then even higher marks are due. (7/10)
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