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School boy Slave
Author: Albert luberschnifter
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(Added on Dec 20, 2006)
(This month 22876 readers) (Total 45064 readers) |
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Justin is used and abused, by two of his fellow students and there father, the school physical education teacher. Read how Justin is enslaved and black mailed into all sorts of demeaning things |
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| Reviewer:
gorgeous
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Jul 19, 2007 |
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Hi could Timothy Lasalle please contact me, many regards, You emailed me about my story around 6 months ago, but i have lost your email, thanyou (7/10)
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nikita
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Jan 3, 2007 |
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Very good beginning. The chapter sets the stage for further humiliations on Justin. I have two suggestions for you to consider. First, read your work out loud. This step catches a few things that escape the first time. Secondly, if possible, run it through a grammer and punctuation check on MS word or some other program before posting it. I look forward to the next installment. (8/10)
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