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Best Springer Ever
Author: Amanda Serve
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(Added on Dec 12, 2006)
(This month 2 readers) (Total 31512 readers) |
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This story is a work of fiction, it is not \'true\'. It is a little different than most I have written in the past, as there is more of a power-exchange, usually its just one person calling the shots and the other person compliant/blackmailed. This one is a little more complex a relationship than that. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
MrEmann
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May 27, 2007 |
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cunt you should use a spell check though. HART is a kind of deer. HEART is the organ that pumps blood through your body, and play in emotions. By the way stupid ever answer your e-mail? Just wondering. (10/10)
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lex ludite
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Dec 17, 2006 |
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This one has plenty to like; insane characters, over the top action, strangeness and plenty of heat.It's not perfect, but it's enough off the beaten path to make me come out of retirement as a reviewer for at least one brief moment. My compliments to the chef for a rather eclectic repast. My ratings don't follow the guidelines slavishly. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
amandaserve
(Edit) (Dec 18, 2006)
- I've seen your name as author of a few stories, so I definitely appreciate the fine words. I do have some ideas for what happens next that may surprise you.
- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Dec 19, 2006)
- I love surprises! Bring it on, I can hardly wait!
- Replied by:
MrEmann
(Edit) (Jun 12, 2007)
- So did she ever surprise you then?
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 13, 2006 |
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the story was ok, but in your synopsi you said it was fiction not fact, my understanding is fiction is NOT fact (6/10)
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- Replied by:
amandaserve
(Edit) (Dec 13, 2006)
- right, I said it is fiction, it is not true. It is sometimes important to say the same thing using different words, or else people will not understand. I appreciate thats the worst thing you can say about the story though.
also, I did submit story codes. maybe they will be applied in later versions.
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