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Donna\'s Lesson
Author: Dee Vega
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(Added on Dec 9, 2006)
(This month 48870 readers) (Total 63508 readers) |
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Donna did not study and failed a test that cost $750.00 each attempt. Now her Master need to determine a suitable punishment to get her back on track. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 18, 2007 |
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somewriters have it some don't, you do, great job (9/10)
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JonMaddux
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Dec 12, 2006 |
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i really enjoyed the plotline!! I cant wait to see how this story advances!! Be forewarned the english major/PhD types are gonna kill ya on the grammatical errors but dont be dismayed. You did a good job and are off to a really good start. (8/10)
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Mad Lews
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Dec 11, 2006 |
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Nice (in a nasty kinda way) story, believable setting, realistic characters, and a great premise.
What more could we ask for? Couple grammatical hiccups that another proof read would catch but a great read overall
(9/10)
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