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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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Rating: (4.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Wartortle
(Edit) |
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Jun 24, 2008 |
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Holy moley, I couldn't even read this. I can't comment on the story itself, because I could't get halfway through it. If you have trouble with English or something, I would seriously recommend finding an editor. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Avralivia
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Dec 5, 2006 |
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The Basic concept was good, but the way it was pulled off wasnt. More time needs to be taken into this to write out the plot, be more descriptive about things.
And please make it clearer who is talking!!! (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Kadence
(Edit) |
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Dec 5, 2006 |
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I'm sorry, but I couldn't follow this at all. I couldn't tell who was speaking at most points in this story, which made it very difficult to read. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
JonMaddux
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Dec 4, 2006 |
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The single large paragraph made it really hard to follow as things changed, a lesson i also learned with my first story. The fact that you seemed to be able to get a 3 page plotline into a one page paragraph was disheartening. (6/10)
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