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Help Wanted
Author: Creative Chattel
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(Added on Dec 3, 2006)
(This month 100232 readers) (Total 132181 readers) |
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A man finds himself in desperate straits which leads him to becoming the slave of his friend and the entire family, adult children, grandparents, friends, his ex wife, his son is also drawn into the mix in a very long story |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nrjb2
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Jan 24, 2012 |
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Great story. I felt sorry for the protagonist, sorry or envious! (10/10)
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lethaloctopus
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Mar 11, 2009 |
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The story was really good. The humiliation, the slavery, the domination, and the submission i can say all these themes were crafted in one brilliant work of art! It just bothers me to see that the story was left unfinished and what's more, the story was never once updated for three years! I just find this story only now, I wished I've had earlier, when you were still in the process of writing, so i've had at least drop you a word of encouragement. Now, I'm desperate to know what will happen, especially to jonathon who was still not completely aware of the situation he had unknowingly put himself into. The story was unfolding really great, not a part bores me so far, in fact my enthusiasm and interest unfailingly build up every chap and that's exactly what made this story stands out from the rest. I just hope I'll hear again from you. By any chance, you published this story in other sites, please do tell me. or by any chance you you have a copy of the story in your drive, again please do tell me or send me a copy. I just hate to see beatiful stories put into waste whenever authors do not finish them. In any case, I wanna thank you for sharing to us your skills and your wonderful ideas. your story, if i may repeat, is beautiful, so beautiful that you made me sign up for an account and made me write my first review. :) (10/10)
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harve3jabot
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Nov 28, 2007 |
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WOW! Great story, hope there's more to come. Love the way the characters are portrayed as very realistic and believable, and the domination and humiliation is very well done. Bravo, and I am very grateful to the author, really appreciate the work - thanks! (and please write Part 5 soon, I'll be looking for it every day! (9/10)
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littleslut
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Dec 18, 2006 |
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fantastic i can't wait for more (10/10)
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gwen101
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Dec 13, 2006 |
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great story. (9/10)
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SteveL
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Dec 5, 2006 |
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Very nice - and hopefully this is just the beginning... ;-) (8/10)
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FootSlaveE
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Dec 4, 2006 |
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Can't wait for more! (10/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Dec 3, 2006 |
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Very good story story development. Characters were well laid out and I hope to read more installments. (7/10)
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