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Miss Pratt\'s Pundit Author: justin benedict
(Added on Oct 10, 2006) (This month 12306 readers) (Total 27648 readers)
Miss Pratt\'s client is a little too right wing for our seasoned domme!

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Reviewer: ElectricBadger (Edit) Rating: Oct 11, 2006
Good concept, and good writing, but it jumps around too much without a logical thread to follow, and introduces too many people and random situations. Focus on one thing before you bring in more, it'll make your story flow better and move faster. (6/10)
Replied by: justincbenedict (Edit) (Oct 14, 2006)
I cannot believe that anyone is so stupid that they can't get the characters right in this story. Fortunately, I am now writing for and it is only to be read by BDSM Mensa members. God help you if you ever read any Thackeray or Henry James, Badger.
Replied by: ElectricBadger (Edit) (Oct 16, 2006)
Wow, you're just a cheery little person, aren't you? Abusing reviewers is completely uncalled for. I didn't say I couldn't understand who was who, I said there was no logical thread to follow. Stated more clearly for you: learn to write a plotline before you start comparing yourself to Thackeray.

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