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Catfighting Sorority Sluts
Author: GabLez
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(Added on Sep 29, 2006)
(This month 20408 readers) (Total 44990 readers) |
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The vicious rivalry between two snotty sorority houses heats up into a sadomasochistic orgy of catfights and BDSM sex. Lots of sexy outfits, strap-on dildos, panty-gags and fetishist kink |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
25toLife
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May 23, 2007 |
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The story lost me very quickly. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Walter
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Oct 12, 2006 |
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The prose in this story is flawless. I think the plot went over the heads of some of these reviewers. Granted, it's not well organized as some of GabbyLez's other stories, but the catty girls are well described. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
The_Trainer
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Oct 10, 2006 |
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You wrote a lot, or you and the sorority girls wrote a lot. At least set up a plot. (5/10)
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Mistress M
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Oct 10, 2006 |
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I think the previous reviewers covered it. All I have to add is go back and start at paragraph one. (5/10)
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schoolboylv
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Oct 8, 2006 |
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This is better now. I changed from a 2 to a 6. I still have a hard time recognizing the characters but this is a decently written story...
I hopefully will get to review this when you add some more or edit this. It is not a terrible idea, but is very poorly set up. I cannot follow the story line as you set up the scene. Then you rush through the entire scene. Re-read this and try to actually explain what the characters are doing and thinking. I'll re-review this if you add more. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Oct 4, 2006 |
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A fair start. I kind of wish you explained what happened with the two missing girls. I will wait to see were you take this story before increasing my rating. (7/10)
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JimmyJump
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Oct 1, 2006 |
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I wonder if both the previous reviewers actually read the story, cuz I can't see anything wrong with it. Sure, "Catfighting Sorority Sluts" isn't as worked-out as other stories by the hand of Gablez, but it still makes for some pretty decent writing, with fair characterizations and a simple but nice plot.
I would give this a fat 8.5 rating, but as half points are impossible, I'll upgrade the score to a skinny 9.
A short story, but a good one. And well-written to boot. What can a reader ask more?
JJ (9/10)
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schoolboylv
(Edit) (Oct 1, 2006)
- Maybe your smarter than me or something because I couldn't even follow the character development of this story. Hopefully the author will fix it and then I can rate it higher....
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Sep 30, 2006 |
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Not even as good as the previous reviewer says. Personally, I think the story line is weak and overdone, the plot not thought out, and the story not much more than a jumble of words. It's a shame there weren't more spelling and grammar errors, so I could give it a 1. (2/10)
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