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Filthy femdoms: forced oral
Author: Aceith
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(Added on Sep 14, 2006)
(This month 203312 readers) (Total 329525 readers) |
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Unsuspecting victims are kidnapped and taken to a location where they are abused by several cruel femdoms and forced to perform orally in the most disgusting manner possible. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
78curious
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Apr 28, 2008 |
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Very good story - the storywriter got into the characters and really made the story flow (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jrnd711
(Edit) (Apr 28, 2008)
- Thank you, it's a complement that I'll treasure.
Aceith
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| Reviewer:
sissymaid
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Dec 8, 2006 |
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amazing story,loved it and carnt wait to read the other parts of it.
has for what jip wrote in his review about there been a little too much shit,no way,the more shit the merrier.
all i want to know is,how and what do i have to do to find myself in a place like that serving Women in the most nasty ways.
keep up the good work and thanks for the story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jrnd711
(Edit) (Dec 8, 2006)
- I really appreciate your complements...I suppose no reality could give what an unbounded fantasy can give...but who is to say that somewhere, someplace, a scenerio like this doesn't actually exist. It's a big world and who really knows. Just to make the stories more interesting, let's assume that there is such a place, and we are actually visiting through these episodes...might be fun that way. Best to you, Aceith
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Oct 7, 2006 |
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The "Breaking" is much too easy. They tortured him exactly once and he was as obedient as a puppy. He should have struck out some more afterwards. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
jrnd711
(Edit) (Oct 7, 2006)
- You may be right, notwithstanding the indelible memory of a couple of severe shocks to the privates. I guess one would have to be in that situation to be able to decide for sure. I'll keep it in mind. Thanks for your comments, best, Aceith
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Sep 18, 2006 |
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The story is well written, goes directly to the point. A little too "much shit" but still an interesting story (7/10)
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- Replied by:
jrnd711
(Edit) (Sep 19, 2006)
- Thanks for your comments and I'm sure I've been heavy on the scat talk but sometimes it's difficult to walk the thin line between sensible presentation and uncontrolled enthusiasum when writing the stories...I guess I just let my ID go and try to get it all out and hope that the base presentation will be entertaining. I'll be working for more balance in the future. Best regards, Aceith
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| Reviewer:
subglenn
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Sep 18, 2006 |
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Wow cant wait for more (8/10)
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- Replied by:
jrnd711
(Edit) (Sep 19, 2006)
- A real nice complement and deserved or not I'll continue to produce what I hope is hot and nasty, if not eloquent. Thanks, Aceith
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| Reviewer:
voyeur1235711
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Sep 15, 2006 |
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Excellent writing. Can't wait for next installments! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
jrnd711
(Edit) (Sep 16, 2006)
- Thank you for your generous complement...I promise I will work to give more of the same, and in generous quantity. The best to you, Aceith
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| Reviewer:
Simplonrider
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Sep 14, 2006 |
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This story has a no nonsense approach, gets to the fun in a few lines. The interesting thing is, the ladies take pleasure out of making the slave like the things they do to him.
It is not my favourite fantasy, though, but I would come back for more if posted. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
jrnd711
(Edit) (Sep 15, 2006)
- I appreciate your comments...I'm hoping that the reader will find hardcore enjoyment in a basic, nitty gritty story where forbidden needs are satisfied. Not everyone is in to this kind of thing but it's a fetish that is just as viable as any other. In this case the characters write the script, and the author sits back and wonders what will come next. Sincerely, Aceith
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