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The Interrogation
Author: Wistan
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(Added on Aug 7, 2006)
(This month 77867 readers) (Total 100743 readers) |
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A female Israeli interrogates a Lebanese boy. She's a professional torturer who uses a mix of sex and violence to get results. This story is based on current events in the middle east; I've tried to make it as authentic as I can, basing it in up to the minute events. More parts may follow depending on feedback, and how the current conflict pans out. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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Rating:  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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May 6, 2008 |
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Interesting idea. Some of the sex is hot but it stops too soon to go to the next torture. Even if the Israelis did something like this why would they let her do anything to Israelis? That kind of doesn't make sense. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
wistan
(Edit) (May 6, 2008)
- She's allowed to do what she does because it gets results, and because she's very "in" with her superiors. I'd planned to develop this more if it had continued.
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| Reviewer:
pet10
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Aug 8, 2006 |
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This story is good and witty too but I think very likely you are being in error. The result of the interrogation is all important…. He can have a heart attack in the course of torture that way isn’t the top. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Wistan
(Edit) (Aug 8, 2006)
- Thanks for the score. I didn't want our victim to die in the story - at least not yet! In part 2, she's decided to take him home with her...
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makito
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Aug 8, 2006 |
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I know where more rockets are (at least one!). Excellent! Please continue and thanks for your work. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Wistan
(Edit) (Aug 8, 2006)
- Lol, thanks. I've already got 3,200 words done for part 2. I'm not quite sure where to take the story though. I want to keep tying it into current events if possible, and am mulling over ways to do that.
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| Reviewer:
Lady`Sapphire
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Aug 8, 2006 |
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Very well written, with excellent characterization, excellent pacing. A bit extreme for my tastes, but it was certainly properly coded. In fact, that it made my stomach turn a bit was evidence of the high quality and believability of the writing. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Wistan
(Edit) (Aug 8, 2006)
- Thanks you kindly. Yes, my stories do tend to run to the extreme end of the spectrum; I'm glad you didn't let that negatively affect your rating.
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nastyaryana
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Aug 7, 2006 |
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Sorry. I find it sadistic, but not at all sexual. Turns me off! Ari (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Wistan
(Edit) (Aug 7, 2006)
- Sorry to hear it. If you don't like sadistic stories you might want to avoid the codes "extreme" and "torture" and "violent" that this was marked with.
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| Reviewer:
Lee Boudine
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Aug 7, 2006 |
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Well written and fast moving. I prefer scenarios of male dominance of females, but the sexual manipulation by the female was sexually interesting in this short story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Wistan
(Edit) (Aug 7, 2006)
- Thank you kindly for your review and the high score! I have a second chapter on the go for this one, and would welcome ideas for things people might like to see happening in further parts.
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