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Kari in Training
Author: Arnold Puttywn
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(Added on Jul 26, 2006)
(This month 152148 readers) (Total 253528 readers) |
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After signing a slavegirl contract with her lover, she was sent to Mistress Elena\'s Slavegirl academy. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
ultimatesubbie
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Mar 16, 2010 |
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a very well written story. Great characters and detail (9/10)
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dnotned
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Feb 17, 2010 |
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Well drawn characters and situations. Believable. A work in progress that has ny attention. (10/10)
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peachy
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Jun 5, 2007 |
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Not only that I love this theme, but you made it perfectly outstanding.
I do enjoy your other writings as well but this does need a sequel.
Million thanks for your time, and creativity. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
wildlife
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Nov 27, 2006 |
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a very enjoyable story. i really like how you added kimi at the end to go with the main character. keep on writing! (9/10)
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dennisthmn
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Sep 7, 2006 |
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A very nice slave story (9/10)
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roro25
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Aug 25, 2006 |
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very well written. good story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Aug 21, 2006 |
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This was a highschool fantasy with potential. Unfortunately, it didn't reach its potential:
Despite an interesting premise and fairly solid set-up, I found this tale to be tremendously lacking. The writing style was overly simplistic and lacking in creativity. Further, the main character was entirely unbelievable; There was no emotional resistance and I found that when confronted by something traumatic she gave a shrug and an "okay" and then skipped merrily on her way. (6/10)
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Polecat
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Aug 2, 2006 |
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Well written. Believable. Looking forward to much much more. (8/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Jul 27, 2006 |
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An excellent beginning! You explain all the background and the characters so the reader will understand what is going on. Your grammar is appropriate and your spelling is tops! Once you get to the "juicy" parts, I am sure I will be raising this 9 to a 10. (9/10)
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Rocky
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Jul 27, 2006 |
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A nicely wicked story thus far. Hope to see more segments in the near future. Probably worthy of a nine, but the ten is to make up for the previous rater's undeservedly low score. (10/10)
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masterbigman
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Jul 27, 2006 |
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u have fill this story with good ingredients.i hope u next time use the slut in public places and humiliate in her public
(3/10)
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- Replied by:
BruceCC
(Edit) (Aug 1, 2006)
- Your comments seem to approve of the story thus far, but your score would seem to indicate that you hate the story. Whausup?
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| Reviewer:
IDCrewDawg
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Jul 27, 2006 |
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There are plenty of hints dropped into the begining of the story to lead the imagination as to what possibilities are on the horizon for the charaters. Well written! (9/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 26, 2006 |
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nice, had a little bit of everything (9/10)
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