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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
SirBosk1
(Edit) |
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Jul 19, 2006 |
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This is a HOT story but there problems with word usage that reduced my rating. For example, "there" was used repeatedly when "their" was the correct choice. The frequent incorrect word choices distracted me and reduced the overall quality of the story. Literotica has some author help available concerning words that sound the same but have different meaning. I don't know if this site does yet. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Millie
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Jul 3, 2006 |
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I loved this, it was hot and heavy from start to finish, but please, it is their cum, or their eyes, or their anything that belongs to someone. Apart from that, which lost it a point, I enjoyed every word. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Jun 30, 2006 |
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That is one well done wild hot story. Look forward to reading more of yours. (9/10)
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