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The Secret Lives Of Some Women
Author: CFNM Lover
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(Added on Jun 22, 2006)
(This month 66678 readers) (Total 99431 readers) |
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A young woman gets introduced to the CFNM ways of her friends and their husbands |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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not bad at all, good flow well written (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jesse1958
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May 10, 2007 |
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Great story, pushed all my buttons. I especially
liked when Cs'wife inspects Rs' penis while he
watches. Hope theres more to come. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Msub44f
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Jun 27, 2006 |
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Love the story I am a submissive male and love reading stories like this I love dominating Females (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Jun 26, 2006 |
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very slow and tedious. The concept is great but the writing is in need of improvement. There is no netural flow to the story (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
foxeye1
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Jun 23, 2006 |
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Okay, so I'm going against the grain a bit, but this story deserves an 8 as it is a little different to the rest. The reader is left to use his/her imagination more. The scene setting is good and the total absence of abusive language is a real bonus - nothing puts me off more.
I hope other parts will follow and no doubt there will be more action involving the naked males and their oh so vulnerable genitals - well I hope so.
Well done. I enjoyed it (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jun 23, 2006 |
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The subject is excellent, but I expected more action, but I suspect it is for part 2 (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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Jun 22, 2006 |
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I love the imagination of this author, and the focus seems to be on the dynamic of D/s rather than play, which is fantastic. Perhaps I'm uncultured, but the names this author uses in this story were hard to remember and pronounce, not to mention that i have no idea what a "salwar" or "chunni" is. If you can get around the odd names and clothing references, you'll enjoy it. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
CFNM Lover
(Edit) (Jun 23, 2006)
- Thank you for the feedback, abitbent. The clothing references and names are (east)Indian. If you're interested, here are some pictures of women in salwar (first two) and saree (3rd pic). The yellow cloth around her neck is a chunni
http://masalanetwork.com/index.php?dir=CA_chap/deewane&page=9&pic=urmila154.jpg&name=Deewane
http://www.santabanta.com/wallpapers/rating.asp?catid=404005
http://media.santabanta.com/gal/bollywood/raniraaga/10.jpg
- Replied by:
abitbent
(Edit) (Jun 24, 2006)
- Thanx cfnm... and now i know... now when i recognize these articles, i can sound so smart and refined by pointing them out. LOL .... and people think reading smut on the net is uneducational! :P
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| Reviewer:
Lisa Jones
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Jun 22, 2006 |
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I enjoyed the premise, and your writing is good and I look forward to parts 2 and beyond. So why only 6/10, because you embed converstaion in paragraphs. This makes it hard to read, and hard to follow who's saying what, which meant I'm so busy keeping track that I can't relax and enjoy the plot.
If you were to adjust the paragraphs I would adjust my rating. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
CFNM Lover
(Edit) (Jun 23, 2006)
- Thank you for the review! I understood what you're saying and how it adds clarity. I only read a few tips on writing on the internet before writing this one, but obviously that bit did not register. Will incorporate into part-2
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