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Weighed
Average (?):  (5/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
(Edit) |
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Jun 22, 2006 |
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The writing itself was ok, the characters developed fine. My score reflects what was submitted, and since the rest of the storyline is only available at another website, it's incomplete in my opinion. Post the whole story, get a better grade. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
DrForbin
(Edit) (Jun 23, 2006)
- That WAS the whole story .... just an odd incident in the relationship with the Mistress
The base story line is available here ... look for How I became a Servant of Ay'esha
DrF
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
(Edit) |
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Jun 22, 2006 |
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not bad but not better than a 6 (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
(Edit) |
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Jun 22, 2006 |
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I found it difficult to read and limited in story. Reason I gave a "neutral" 5 (5/10)
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