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The Pavilion
Author: Unknown
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(Added on Aug 8, 2001)
(This month 97325 readers) (Total 114941 readers) |
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The husband gave her wife about the surprising vacation trip to Jamaica. There he lead her into a totally wild fantasy world she never thought about. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 28, 2007 |
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nice, orginal very interesting to read (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
submiz
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Dec 28, 2001 |
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original and erotic, well written and paced. i would definitely like to see more... the realism of the descriptions was exquisite. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ownedgirl
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Aug 11, 2001 |
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vERY GOOD STORY, ALTHOUGH IT SLOWED DOWN A BIT THE FINAL ONE THIRD. WELL WRITTEN, AND THE FISH TANK EPISODE WAS ORIGINAL AND WELL THOUGHT OUT. i KEEP GOING BACK TO RE-READ THAT PART OVER AND OVER. i HOPE THIS AUTHOR WRITES MORE (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Aug 10, 2001 |
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An interesting story with a dense atmosphere and some unique ideas. The style of writing is somewhat stereotypic, and the story slacks a little bit in the third quarter. But all in all really recommendable. (8/10)
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