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Cheerleader's Torment
Author: James Dawson
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(Added on Aug 7, 2001)
(This month 117589 readers) (Total 159674 readers) |
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Kate finally was accepted by cheerleader squad, but only after she passed the test, which no girl wanted to talk about it. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
wincert
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Apr 20, 2010 |
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This is story that first brought to my attention this type of story. I fell in love with it when i first read it and like most first loves it never goes away. I have searched for years to see if it was ever finished, but alas it dosnt look kike it will happen. 2 other people have made good attempts to continue the tale but James you never did. Many thanks anyway for pointing me in this direction (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 11, 2009 |
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Well written, well described with good character development.
Inventive and well thought-out embarassing little moments as well.
Good read.
JJ (8/10)
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Jill Bird
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Jun 30, 2004 |
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a very entertaining treatment of a humiliatin scenario (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 6, 2004 |
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yes sir!!!! (9/10)
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don11
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Jun 16, 2003 |
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Good tale and well told.
HIghly credible.
But unfinished and one chapter is repeated.
I'd like more chracterisation of the other characters. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mixups
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Feb 26, 2002 |
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Excellent (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmark
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Aug 8, 2001 |
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What a wonderful story! The writer takes the time to describe to us the emotional process the 'victim' is going through and the pleasure others get from it step by step, in a perfect language (more then can be said about my English I am afraid), developping a nice plot and creating a tremendous suspense. Lots of erotic writings go straight to the point, and simply forget to create a phantasy in the mind of the reader. I have to give the highest score. All the more a pity the story is not complete. (10/10)
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