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From Innocent to Slave
Author: imurss
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(Added on May 30, 2006)
(This month 72164 readers) (Total 113730 readers) |
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A naive young woman is captured and enslaved and introduced to a world that she had no idea even existed. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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May 31, 2006 |
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22 different codes, but just 5 KB in length - an extreme discrepancy, even for a first chapter. Authors should let their work grow and ripen BEFORE posting it. It's disappointing to read a good start like this, and to be almost shure the story will never become finished - there are already too many examples of this kind here.
As usual, I will rise my rating when the story is mature. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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May 31, 2006 |
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This is way too short to even judge the quality of the story. I will change my rating if and when you post more to it. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Aussiegirl1
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May 31, 2006 |
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A good start imurss. I look forward to the continuation of the story. Well done. (9/10)
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