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The Revolution\'s Pig Contest
Author: counterparts199
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(Added on May 15, 2006)
(This month 67392 readers) (Total 92562 readers) |
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American whites have finally caused enough hardship to force the revolution. First order, rounding up the men and women and sending them off to the longpig camps. Obviously fiction. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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May 17, 2006 |
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A fine beginning except for formatting. The wide gaps between paragraphs are distracting and unnecessary.
I look for a continuation, perhaps with some younger participants? (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 16, 2006 |
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not badly done, but where do you go from here (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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May 15, 2006 |
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The plot was very good. The story is off to an excellent start. (7/10)
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