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Darkheart
Author: The Outsider
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(Added on Apr 28, 2006)
(This month 53030 readers) (Total 66371 readers) |
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the story is based on Unseen_Unread |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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Apr 30, 2006 |
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A few grammar mistakes and spelling errors. The plot was hard to follow, it kind of jumps from one thing to another too quickly and doesn't take long enough to develop a story or it's characters. This story is was too unrealistic for my taste. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rabbit1
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Apr 28, 2006 |
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Let me be the first to say ---well done ---and I hope to see more (9/10)
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