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Human Toilet Fantasy
Author: Jim aaa
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(Added on Apr 25, 2006)
(This month 91570 readers) (Total 119243 readers) |
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He only hoped that his fantasy could come true some day |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Sally51
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Aug 10, 2008 |
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I enjoyed the use of the newbie (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
thecollectorii
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Apr 26, 2006 |
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Not my taste but well written and easy to follow (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Apr 26, 2006 |
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The basics are ok, but a little exagerated to my views. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Apr 25, 2006 |
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Well, it's an OK story, I guess. There is no anticipation, no real suspense, no love, no mystery, nothing happening to be upset about. It's like an economy car: it will get you from point A to B but there's no real fun to it.
Good luck with your next tale, or with further chapters of this one; maybe you could try a different style of story. (5/10)
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