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Author: js207
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(Added on Mar 7, 2006)
(This month 21357 readers) (Total 47358 readers) |
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An inexperienced young man hedges his bets by identifying as a \'switch\', but is soon corrected by a beautiful Mistress - then confronted with a dilemma. Mostly a true story. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nrjb2
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Jan 25, 2012 |
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Very unique and well written. Out of hundreds of stories I have not read anything like it. Well done! (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 31, 2007 |
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something diferent yet very enjoyable to read (7/10)
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tkm
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Aug 13, 2006 |
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Not exactly my style, but a very fun read none the less. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 8, 2006 |
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In fact I 'm disappointed that a potential good story, looks to me as only a "report of technical webcam and internet problems". If this is only the first part then I will certainly review my comments when the next comes up. I gave a "neutral" 5 taking a possible continuation into account. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
js207
(Edit) (Apr 9, 2006)
- Sorry about that - this is indeed only the first part. I've shortened the chapter 1 you saw, and added an ominous turn of events, in which Mistress decides to take matters into Her own hands...
Incidentally, someone asked me where readers can find the story "Rebecca Mine" which is mentioned in chapter 1. It's made up of about a dozen chapters, all archived at www.asstr.org - just search for 'rebecca mine' (with quotes) and up it comes. One of my all-time favorite stories!
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