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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
MISTRESS H
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Aug 1, 2008 |
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Well written, easy to read and enjoyable... Looking for more. Thank You!!!! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
underherthumb
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Apr 2, 2006 |
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Excellent story - I like the updated chapter as much as the original!
I GOTTA admit - I HAD to try out the seating in my Minivan after reading that first chapter. Can't wait for the next! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
bicyclerepairman
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Jan 18, 2006 |
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A good start, the secret to a good story involving a young girl is getting the level of knowledge right and not making her just a young adult. This worked well. Look forward to more. Meanwhile I'm off to the bathroom (sorry - bit crude of me!) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mindcontrolmouse
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Jan 17, 2006 |
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Wonderful start to a story... well written ... sexy .... I look forward to more !!! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
CarolinaSpanker
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Jan 16, 2006 |
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she wiggled out of her sexy jeans and blue Hanes panties. She promptly sat down…On my face, at first I was stunned then I was even more stunned when I felt a sharp pain right on the shaft of my cock she leaned forward a bit to look at my face. “When I sit you lick whatever hole is by your mouth and you take big whiffs of the other by your nose got me Daddy boy?” She sat back down before I could answer.
I thought the use of the blue Hanes Panties gave the story a realistic more naughty feel.
Now she could spank his ass ironically with the same wooden hairbrush she strokes her hair to it's glowing shine. Then she could pull down her panties and fart in his face in new disrespect fcor her stepfather, that would really be smelling her asshole for REAL!
I started licking her tasty pussy and taking big deep smells of her ass.
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- Replied by:
markforuse
(Edit) (Jan 16, 2006)
- You are heading down the right road
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| Reviewer:
makito
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Jan 16, 2006 |
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Marvelous start, please continue! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Jan 16, 2006 |
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Good beginning and I hope to read more (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
littlemister
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Jan 12, 2006 |
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I Hope there is more to this story I am waiting for part 3 (7/10)
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