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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
(Edit) |
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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Not bad. Mr Meyers and cohort are well portrayed, with great dialogue. Not too keen on the pedo tone, tho.
JJ (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Sennia
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May 5, 2006 |
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As far as horrific kinks go, this was great for a fantasy scenario. I felt it lingered a little too long on the final scene though, at least compared with the rest of the story. A 'mini series' of such involving the same school would be absolutely perfect, with different students and staff, but by itself, it all feels as if its in the middle of nowhere...
I truly hope you write more though, as I love reading extreme scenarios! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 26, 2005 |
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nothing spectacular (6/10)
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- Replied by:
ghostsblood
(Edit) (Dec 27, 2005)
- Your right.. but hey If I was a spectacular writer you'd be paying for it :) I dont spose you have anything constructive to submit? Seeing as this is my first story, I'm all for critiques.
- Replied by:
mkemse
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2006)
- actualy i submitted a story sometime ago, that also was my first attempt, i have not beable to finish the works but got fair reviews for the story, i was not expecting anything great as it was my first post, so anythingi got as far as constructive critisism, i took as just that, i ahev ideas for atories all the time, i simpy do not have the talent to write them
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Dec 20, 2005 |
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I'm sorry I couldn't give you a higher rating. Writing in present tense is very difficult to do and very difficult to read. A proof reader would have caught the punctuation errors and run-on sentences. There were quite a few. Other than that, it was ok. I'm sorry that my previous review lacked any helpful information. The stories I review are read it twice. It's the least I could do when a writer put a lot of effort in putting together a story. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Writers improve with each piece they write. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
ghostsblood
(Edit) (Dec 20, 2005)
- Thanks for your imput.. perhaps next time could you please put some words to your opinion?
- Replied by:
nikita
(Edit) (Dec 20, 2005)
- You are correct. I should have stated the reasons for my rating. Glad you called me on the carpet for that.
- Replied by:
ghostsblood
(Edit) (Dec 21, 2005)
- Thanks Nikita.
If you read the original you would see how much better my editing is in this one. Unfortunatly after reading over it so much I tend to miss some obvious mistakes.
If you are offering to proof read it I would be more than thankful :)
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