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Eternal Victim
Author: Hector
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(Added on Dec 19, 2005)
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After her first attack a rapist keeps returning to the same woman. Will she ever be free? |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
bmtphoenix
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Jan 7, 2008 |
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Very nice. It was sort of believable in an unbelievable sort of way. Very, very good. (9/10)
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esp_166
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Jan 14, 2006 |
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I agree with H Dean that there were a number of items that were implausible but a lot of that was resolved by the last line, an excellent twist! Not sure if he noticed this? Before that I would have rated it pretty low for plausibility. Still some concern about the change in attitude of the work colleagues for instance and the trip to Brazil.
However in content some very strong ideas and neat touches, especially if you're into the more brutal stuff that tends to turn me on. Found myself torn between disgust with what Emma was going through and getting really hot over it at the same time. Possibly a little too strong on the amount of punishment the girl took and how much she could function after all that abuse? However found it a real hot story.
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Dec 22, 2005 |
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This is one of those stories that could have been so much more had the author taken a little more time in refining the story and fleshing out a few more details. Certain things were rather implausible and could have been better thought out, too. There were certain grammatical errors and spelling gaffs but they did not really distract. This author shows much promise but needs refinement. I look forward to his next story. Hmm, Hector, is that from the Greek "Hector"? (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Parker
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Dec 19, 2005 |
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Nice story. I liked how you took the time to take the victim through each stage leading to her eventual capitulation. A lot of writers would have skipped many of those stages entirely. Good ending too. (8/10)
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