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Daddy's Girl
Author: delaquoi
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(Added on Oct 12, 2005)
(This month 9421 readers) (Total 18935 readers) |
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Two girlfriends catch up over a couple of bottles of champagne. Nikki starts to tell Sam about her new life with the man she calls 'Daddy'. A gentle introduction - other adventures may lie ahead. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Oct 17, 2005 |
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Sweet and perhaps a little too cute, but I suspect that was what you were aiming for. Yes your two characters come off like a pair of adolecents but that's sort of the point isn't it? (8/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Oct 15, 2005 |
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It's not that your writing is awful, you do know how to write conversation, but your characters come off sounding like they are about thirteen! It's just a bit too "giggly" to me. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jacen
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Oct 15, 2005 |
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A very good start from a author with a lot of potential. Dont be a tease- give us more! (9/10)
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Breannefun
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Oct 13, 2005 |
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Wow. This was an intriguing little story. At first, I was lulled by the pitter patter between the two characters, not expecting things to heat up. And most importantly, things heated up in a totally unexpected way! It was almost humiliating, with Nikki's recitation to Sam. I found myself becoming intrigued! I would love to go over for dinner sometime...along with a spanking! (9/10)
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