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Bondage on the Cards
Author: Desmios
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(Added on Jun 20, 2001)
(This month 54369 readers) (Total 72092 readers) |
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The sequel to "Domestic Slavery", with the same main characters and some new ones as well, but more fanciful because it goes beyond PRIVATE B&D games between two consenting adults. Still fairly light- hearted, though, and a pretty good reflection of the kind of activities I'd like to enjoy. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
slvWriting
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May 10, 2007 |
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Some of the bondage employed seems quite complex and one can't exactly visualize it because of the quick and "unthorough" descriptions. The story itself was not bad, though a little bit over the top. The first part of the series was set to be realistic, this seemed a little far from it. Good effort, though! (7/10)
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somewriter
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Feb 8, 2006 |
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Good ideas, interesting scenarios, but the author skips through scenes quite quickly. I understand the temptation to move to the next activity, but the story would be enhanced by spending more time describing the scenes with more descriptive language and feelings from the characters. (7/10)
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