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Her Sunday Best
Author: Kev
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(Added on Sep 24, 2005)
(This month 13005 readers) (Total 34696 readers) |
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Kate needed a dress to wear for a party but ended up with a somewhat different one that what she had in mind. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 9, 2009 |
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Okay, so I liked the story, but that doesn't mean it is without flaws.
For instance, there's too much "miss"-ing around. Adding a name to the "Miss" would have done wonders. Also, and this is something authors tend to do more often, the saleswoman seems to be a psychic and knows instantly how and which buttons to push. This is caused by the mental picture the author has about what should happen to "young Miss". Since the author knows the outcome, he forgets that he shouldn't project that knowledge onto the saleswoman.
Lastly, because "little Miss" seems to have a bit of a temper, it would have worked better to lend the saleswoman a more chiding, seductive attitude, instead of harshly scolding "little Miss", otherwise the latter, judging by her temper, would have left the shop in no time, regardless of her little fantasies.
But, like I said, I liked the story.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 1, 2006 |
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exellent (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
scharat
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Sep 27, 2005 |
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Very nice stories!I like the idea of emphazising the humilating regression to childhood by combining adult underwear like corsets and stockings with childish outer clothing. The same thing shoud be added to your other story (but of course no bra ;-)). The whole thing is on my line. But may I recommend something: You should extend the decription of the clothes, for e.g. like the dress looks like or what shoes the "girl" is wearing. That would be cool. I hope to read more of you soon. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Kev
(Edit) (Sep 27, 2005)
- Thanks for the detailed comment. Since I'm just beginning to write I have a long way to go. Adding more detail is something Im working on. Now I will put extra efort into describing the clothes.
As you may allready know the lingerie aspect is important to me so more corsets and stockings for the people.
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Sep 26, 2005 |
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It was entertaining. While it was about eroticism, I didn't find it that erotic. Perhaps it just didn't happen to hit my particular buttons. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Kev
(Edit) (Sep 27, 2005)
- Can please em all I allways say. I'll settle for entertaining, that better than many other stories I find in here. thanks
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Sep 26, 2005 |
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Not bad (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
many
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Sep 26, 2005 |
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well done (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Sep 25, 2005 |
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Besides the occasional wrong word (including
homophones) that the spell check wouldn't
catch, the only real problem I had with this
story is that I felt the corset was inconsistent
with the age reversal elements. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Kev
(Edit) (Sep 26, 2005)
- Seeing some of your other reviews giving me an 8 is humbling. I feel that the corset is used to further state that her body is just like a little girl. It's only with the corset she get some womanly curves and the sales woman uses this to put Kate even further under her spell.
I use silk and satin heavily in my stories and the corset is a personal favourite of mine so I might be a little biast :)
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luka
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Sep 25, 2005 |
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I loved the way you kept her out of control again and again and I hope this is not the end of her adventure (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Kev
(Edit) (Sep 26, 2005)
- I'm a big fan of "loosing control" as a story element. As I said in the previous comment this was written as a stand alone story but seeing that it was well recieved I might send Kate back for another round.
Thank you for the comments, they all inspire me to continue writing.
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| Reviewer:
Jacen
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Sep 25, 2005 |
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I love the ageplay aspects, and overall, it was highly well written. Some of the details were a bit vauge, especially towards the end. I would hope this one continues, maybe even with diapers. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Kev
(Edit) (Sep 26, 2005)
- Thanks again for the insane rating :)
This one was written as a stand alone story. I felt that doing chapters put preassure on me to continue, sucking my creativity away. But who knows, Kate might return for another fitting in the future.
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| Reviewer:
rhmusic
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Sep 24, 2005 |
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I love these stories! Kev, please keep writing. The idea of turning women into little girls feels fresh, heartwarming, and intensely exciting all at the same time. Bravo! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Kev
(Edit) (Sep 26, 2005)
- Thank you for your kind words. I especially like the word heartwarming to describe the story.
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