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    Class Day Trip
    
    Author: Paladin
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    (Added on Aug 20, 2005)
            (This month 56325 readers) (Total 66971 readers) | 
   
   
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    This was writen to be a continuation of a 'Modern Dairy' but never posted. | 
   
 
 
   
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    | Reviewer: 
    AsianAngel
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    Sep 4, 2005 | 
   
   
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        I haven't read "Modern Dairy," so I can't comment on that, but this was interesting. I agree that older subjects would have made it better for me. Also, there were some small typos that jolted me whenever I saw them. Overall I really did enjoy this one, though it could have been better. (7/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    nikita
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    Aug 26, 2005 | 
   
   
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        It would have been a much better read if you would have kept to the original style of the story. (5/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
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    Aug 20, 2005 | 
   
   
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        the story was good but using older subjects would have made it much better (7/10) 
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