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A Flat Surprise
Author: Fantazmaster
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(Added on Aug 13, 2005)
(This month 15394 readers) (Total 33659 readers) |
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Liz has enjoyed a thrilling online relationship with her Master for the past year. Now at last he is coming to visit her during his vacation.A large box is delivered to Liz prior to his arrival with instructions for Liz not to open it. Liz finds that the box is not the only surprise for her that day as reality takes control of events in the middle of a scene Master has setup for her. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
NCbarbara
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Jul 18, 2008 |
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Please finish this story - am riveted! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
tainted Angel
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Jan 5, 2007 |
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A very good begining to the story, It catches you early on and nicely exploits that fear of the 'wrong' person finding you in the right position. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Mar 24, 2006 |
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Sorry I hadn't gotten around to read this sooner. It is a newer concept, cyber D/s, and it is fast becoming a way to connect. This is well written and has the added bonus of surprise. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 13, 2005 |
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so far so good (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
MistressHormones
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Aug 13, 2005 |
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Excellent storyline! Looking forward to the next chapter! (8/10)
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