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Family of Slaves Author: Pallidan
(Added on Aug 13, 2005) (This month 23002 readers) (Total 43195 readers)
Linda comes home from college to find her mom and dad are now the neighbor slaves.

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Weighed Average (?): (6/10)
Average Rating: (6/10)
Highest Rating: (7/10)
Lowest Rating: (4/10)

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Reviewer: Engineer (Edit) Rating: Aug 14, 2005
Numerous errors in spelling, grammar and sentence construction make the story very hard to read. The plot is developing a little bit too fast, so it looks not very realistic. But story as well as author show potential for improvements. (4/10)

Reviewer: Rocky (Edit) Rating: Aug 13, 2005
The author is making some progress, but the sentence structure is extremely awkward. Many run-ons, including the very first sentence in the story, severely detracted from what could have been an excellent read. I don't usually bother reading Pallidan's works, but didn't notice the author's name before I opened it. I would recommend that he start forwarding his stories to one of the numerous volunteer proofreaders available here. (5/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Aug 13, 2005
I hope you plan to add to this, if so i will adjust my review and rating at that time (7/10)

Reviewer: slaveneedledick (Edit) Rating: Aug 13, 2005
Palliden is making progress in his writings. This another good start for a story. (7/10)

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