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Aerials Begins Her Training
Author: Harold Wellington
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(Added on Jul 23, 2005)
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This is the story of slave Aerial. Her training has been successful and she has proven to be quite a quick learner. After two months of training on-line, carrying out her Masters orders on herself, she agreed to the next step in her training. Real time training at her Masters home. |
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Sep 7, 2005 |
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couldn't get through this one... too much bad english, ie wrong word choices. for instance, one does not "transgress" to the next level... one may ascend to the next level, or rise to the next level, but to transgress is to wander from the correct path. (5/10)
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Falcon53
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Aug 25, 2005 |
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A good story. I couldn't take a break & was saddened that it ended where it did. The Authors attention to detail is well above average & I shall return to read future chapters. (9/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Aug 20, 2005 |
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Like Scarlett O'Hara ... tomorrow is another day? Very nicely written story, lots of action and sex! (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 26, 2005 |
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very well done (9/10)
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chooky_104
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Jul 26, 2005 |
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I liked it. This is my kind of story, cant wait for future installments. (8/10)
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mastersall
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Jul 24, 2005 |
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Hot tale with intelligence and some humor... looking forward to further installments (10/10)
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