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The Prayer
Author: I.W. Under
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(Added on Jul 23, 2005)
(This month 14194 readers) (Total 26410 readers) |
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A traveling merchant seeks aid in a small village and finds something else: a girl who is a living sacrifice. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 17, 2010 |
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This is one of those rare occasions where I couldn't get myself to even remotely like the story.
Well written, yes, imaginative too and even well tought out, but somehow, "The Prayer" gave me the creeps.
Maybe because it's a bit too close to a reality as lived by a lot of religeous nutcases, I don't know.
JJ (8/10)
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Mad Lews
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Jan 2, 2006 |
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Not a bad story, quite inventive in places. You do need to keep in mind we poor readers haven't too much of a clue as to the background of your characters and their world. We could use a bit more info on both as you continue on with the story.
Ask and you shall receive, the story is quite wonderful, inventive, descriptive with a bit of a romantic twist.
I was remiss not returning to it sooner but I hope to make amends. Please allow me to revise my rating
(9/10)
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kaleun76
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Aug 30, 2005 |
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Holy sh@t this is hot.
More, more, you must post more right away!
Don't keep us waiting.
(10/10)
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LordVetinari
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Aug 2, 2005 |
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Outstanding! Well written, erotic as hell. Truly an excellent story. (9/10)
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cindi
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Jul 28, 2005 |
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beautifully thought out and written (10/10)
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subbunny
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Jul 27, 2005 |
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A pretty good read, but just not my taste. I was facinated by the idea of the culture and would have like to have seen that explored more. Perhaps a flashback episode showing her training??? (8/10)
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pejanon
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Jul 26, 2005 |
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Very interesting. Original concept. Good storytelling - the reader gets to feel the action. Good ambience too.
But - Prayer is one of a kind. A character one remembers even when the story itself has long faded away! I just loved her. Great build up - now fulfill the promise.
(8/10)
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chooky_104
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Jul 23, 2005 |
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I enjoyed the plot of the story even though I do not quite understand 'your' position in the story. Are you looking for a slave, or are you a Tourist? (8/10)
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