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    Shan
    
    Author: C. Lakewood
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    (Added on Jun 25, 2005)
            (This month 56566 readers) (Total 71415 readers) | 
   
   
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    Rachel, a 43-year-old divorcee and harassed middle manager, falls under the spell of a mysterious voice on the phone.... | 
   
 
 
   
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    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
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    Jun 26, 2005 | 
   
   
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        so far the story is good and seems to be getting better, let's see what the next chapters bring (9/10) 
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    Jun 25, 2005 | 
   
   
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        Very well written story that does a lot of teasing. Not only sexually but also story wise for the identity of Shan is revealed only in the last moment. (9/10) 
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    darklace
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    Jun 25, 2005 | 
   
   
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        An excellent story, aside from being correctly spelled and punctuated (mostly), it was intense and erotic.  I loved the subtelty.  Please tell me that there will be more! (9/10) 
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        - Replied by: 
C_Lakewood
  (Edit)  (Jun 25, 2005)
 
        - "An excellent story, aside from being correctly 
 spelled and punctuated (mostly)...."  Thanks for  the kudos (mostly).  But I really would be  grateful if you'd let me know what wasn't  spelled and/or punctuated correctly.  No matter  how careful the proof-reading, these things do  happen. I have not intended a sequel, but who knows?  At  the end of each of my stories, there tends to be  a resolution, but not a conclusion.    
       
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