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Female Domination Games
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on May 31, 2005)
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A mother and daughter are transformed into slavery by her daughter friend and mother. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
kevin666
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Jan 25, 2006 |
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Thanks. A very good story that I really enjoyed. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Sep 9, 2005 |
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The story overall lacked continuity, but portions of the plot were interesting. The author does need to get some help from and editor to fix the numerous grammatical problems. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Jun 2, 2005 |
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The plot was ok but it jumped around to much. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jun 2, 2005 |
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Learn to use quotation marks. You have some good ideas, but your lack of grammar skills keeps your stories from being good. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 1, 2005 |
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good so far, let's see where you go next, never trust a friends family in ever case (8/10)
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