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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Dominica Potestas
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Apr 26, 2008 |
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Slow down a bit, savour the humiliation. How does she feel. Why does she submit so easily. Nice idea though. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Falcon
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Apr 20, 2008 |
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Excellent story of judicial enslavement of an employee by her male boss. That he has the power to do this through the court system and the prison gives this story a unique plot. Very good description of her feelings and of his opportunities to visit her in jail and enjoy her humiliations. I hope this author will give us a sequel in which the young lady has to go back to her company after release from jail under very new and novel terms of employment! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 29, 2006 |
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i realy enjoyed reading this story (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Masterdesire
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May 29, 2005 |
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Except for the grammatical errors and spacing issues. Not to bad of a storyline. However it could use more background on characters. Just being set free was also implausible. (5/10) (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Breannefun
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May 19, 2005 |
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I have a deep suspicion that English is not your native language, and given that, you've done remarkably well. I agree with chksng19 that it would be a good idea to find an editor to "look" over your work before submitting it. What I liked best was the method you used in descriptions. You always described the environment, but never the people, leaving it all in the reader's mind. I absolutely loved the scene where the main character is hung by her ankles in the Men's Prison...always a wonderful fantasy. Keep up the good work! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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May 18, 2005 |
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A good story, marred by some typos which an editor could help with.
You have a tendency to rush through humiliation and punishment sections. Slow down a bit: these parts are the reason your reader has chosen the story. (7/10)
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