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College Tuition
Author: Charles Frank
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(Added on Apr 19, 2005)
(This month 160947 readers) (Total 277131 readers) |
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An asian girl wanting to go to college gets a good deal without spending any momey. But, what does she give up to attend. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
ALLAHHAVEMERCY
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Apr 19, 2012 |
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I enjoyed the first chapter but then the rest of the chapter I did not read at all because it just again get repetitive repetitive repetitive. The author for all his abundant creativity shown in Tracy in Trouble and Spread them, just seem to be running out of ideas. I think it would be great if the author just spread his ideas out to several different charactors rather than just one, so they would always be fresh. Especially the story Spread Them. I read it a few years ago and I still jerk off to it every time I read it. It was just sssssssooooooooo freakin hot! But it gets repetitive repetitive repetitive. Just kill the character and blackmail a new one. Kill the character literally. And PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! PLEEEEEAAAAAAAASEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! (9/10)
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kristycumslut
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May 12, 2007 |
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This is a very good story just wish that the chapters would come sooner. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
slutev
(Edit) (Aug 11, 2006)
- Thank you, from both of us. girl will try to post more often. Please contact girl (slutev@yahoo.com) so we can share ideas.
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chksng19
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Sep 2, 2006 |
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Looking at the 18 ratings before mine, I realize I feel the same way. This story rubs me all different ways. There are some grammatical concerns which seem to be much less frequent in later chapters. The different formatting is a concern. Why is one chapter all underlined?
But the hardest for me to deal with is the way I feel about the subject matter. I love the way steph is degraded and used, but not the way she is not allowed to explain herself. She is punished for things she does not know are offenses. My sub must be very lucky; she only gets punished for breaking rules she knows.
Please keep offering more of the story; it is quite enjoyable. I think. (7/10)
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ramses
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Aug 28, 2006 |
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Really great story. Congratulations. (10/10)
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woolfighter
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Aug 27, 2006 |
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Wonderful, can't get enough. (9/10)
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slutsteph
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Aug 22, 2006 |
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girl knows what is happening here, and it makes her juice! (10/10)
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schoolboylv
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Aug 17, 2006 |
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I really enjoyed this story but there are a lot of mispellings and run-on sentences. Also sometimes it is hard to know who is talking. If you are not going to capitalize the girls names to show they are submissive you still need to capitalize the first word of a new sentence if it is not their name. I enjoyed the story but it is a little bit difficult to read. I suggest next time you have someone edit it. (7/10)
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balthasaur
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Jan 23, 2006 |
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Wonderful work. Granted it needs some editing in the way paragraphs. Good work. (8/10)
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oliveroflondon
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Sep 22, 2005 |
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Great fun. Unbelievable as many have commented below, but we escape to fiction for release from a sometimes boring and tedious world. First story I think I have read of Frank's; I will look up his others. (9/10)
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niftyfree
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Sep 6, 2005 |
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With parts 2 and 3, the story is definitely getting better. I feel the agreement in part 1 was too thorough. A more deceptive contract would have been better. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 25, 2005 |
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i enjoyed reading it and look forward to more chapters (7/10)
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michael.conroy8@btin
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Aug 24, 2005 |
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one of my favorite writers and he is on form again great beginning cannot wait to read more (9/10)
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joepro
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Aug 24, 2005 |
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I enjoyed reading this story.I think this will be another great story by Charles Frank (9/10)
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crickette
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Jul 17, 2005 |
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Nice beginning. It will be interesting to see how she fares. (7/10)
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ArcTangent
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Apr 29, 2005 |
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Excellent start. As the story progresses I will reevaluate my rating. The grammar did not bother me. (6/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Apr 25, 2005 |
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Excellent plot and the foundation is set however, the author may want to proof read his work prior to publishing. I did enjopy the story though. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Master_c
(Edit) (Apr 25, 2005)
- Thank you for the support. I will do better about proof reading, but I did use the spell checker before I sent it. I will try to do better.
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 21, 2005 |
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Nice set up and start to the story. I will follow along to see if a higher rating would be in order
(7/10)
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- Replied by:
Master_c
(Edit) (Apr 21, 2005)
- Thank you for the nice words and just for you, I'll continue with the story.
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| Reviewer:
ropebinder
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Apr 21, 2005 |
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Run-on sentences, sentence fragments, uncapitalized words, etc. This piece was difficult to read to the end. To summarize, Asian girls wants to go to college, but cannot afford it. She receives a letter from a mysterious college promising her free tuition. She travels for an interview and during the interview is informed that she'll have to remain naked and become a sex slave in order to attend. She, of course, agrees and the story ends. I cannot recommend this story and cannot fathom anyone being a Charlie Frank fan. Sorry. (2/10)
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- Replied by:
Master_c
(Edit) (Sep 30, 2005)
- Thats ok
- Replied by:
schoolboylv
(Edit) (Aug 17, 2006)
- I think his story idea is very well thought-out but I agree with you that it is very difficult to read.
- Replied by:
woolfighter
(Edit) (Aug 27, 2006)
- It's unfair. CF offers his view and I like the 'ambience' of his stories. I'm a fan.
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| Reviewer:
darklace
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Apr 20, 2005 |
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I've been a big fan of Charles Frank's work for quite a while, but I have to admit that the plausability of his situations can be hard to swallow. Plus, his characters don't really develop; The heroine always bemoans her fate, never does anything about it or resigns herself fully to it. Other than that, pure fun abounds. (6/10)
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Mr. Pete
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Apr 20, 2005 |
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I really wanted to suspend my disbelief, but please! Why would anyone attend a college they'd never heard of? And there's really no such thing considering all the online college reviews. It was so far-fetched I couldn't get past the first few paragraphs. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Master_c
(Edit) (Sep 30, 2005)
- OK
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