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The Life of Amber Gleason Author: Dave Robinson
(Added on Mar 12, 2005) (This month 49784 readers) (Total 66263 readers)
The Story of a young women exploring her sexual fantasy's, who quickly finds out there her most frightning nightmares.

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Weighed Average (?): (4/10)
Average Rating: (3.5/10)
Highest Rating: (5/10)
Lowest Rating: (2/10)

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Reviewer: MstrThor (Edit) Rating: Mar 18, 2005
Good start needs some refinment and more development. (5/10)

Reviewer: Grako (Edit) Rating: Mar 16, 2005
Lots of promise. Part 2 could be an improvement on writing skills - but the story line is developing well. (5/10)

Reviewer: ropeburn (Edit) Rating: Mar 14, 2005
Atrocious spelling ruins story. Just a few examples:
"questionair"
"fantasys"
"funloveing"
"message poped up"
"possitive"
"orenge"
"she could feel her bowls giveing way"
There are five spelling/grammar errors in the story title alone! (3/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Mar 13, 2005
3 is very genenrous, go back and read the story, needs help to manythings to list here (3/10)

Reviewer: bisarah (Edit) Rating: Mar 12, 2005
i am not certain where to start here. it is entirely possible that this story might have a bit of promise, but who would know with all the typos and use of the wrong word. You need to get a typing program with spellcheck and grammar and use it. And you need to learn the difference between ad/add, there/their, and others. Get a nice book on writing and improve your skills and try again. (2/10)

Reviewer: allstar (Edit) Rating: Mar 12, 2005
There may be quite a decent story somewhere in there, but I doubt many will see it given the atrocious spelling and grammar.
It may be a stroke story, but read it before you submit it- or, at the absolute least, spell check it.
If you can find an editor, there may well be some potential there.
(2/10)

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