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The Baroness and the Woodshed
Author: Stephanie Von Essen
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(Added on Feb 28, 2005)
(This month 11221 readers) (Total 24050 readers) |
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A short vignette about a Baroness who craves the harshest discipline from the best dominatrix in Germany during weekly sessions in the woodshed. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Lee Boudine
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Aug 28, 2006 |
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A worthwhile read for almost any taste.
It lacks the detail and feeling of an author writing about a personally enjoyed fetish. (8/10)
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bisarah
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Mar 12, 2005 |
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the story is good but the author could put a little more emotion in it and fewer references to her big tits! i am looking forward to seeing the next chapter. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Mar 12, 2005 |
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I wish I could have written this story. Contrary to certain portions of the membership, over the top is most effective when it is truly over the top. The imperfections mentioned by the previous reviewers are all easily rectified. Brava and looking forward to more of the same in the very near future. As is my wont on occasion, I choose to ignore the rather slavish rating system. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
frank47_1999
(Edit) (May 11, 2005)
- Lex,
Like you I too wished I have writen this story. It is one of the most erotic articles I have ever read. Regretably when I wrote to the author praising her I didn't even get a reply. I would love to read a part 2
Regards
Frank
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SVE
(Edit) (May 11, 2005)
- I am very honoured by your comments. I am in the process of writing a story about my experiences at the Alpen Wellness Institute, one of the world's most exclusive spas. I hope you will enjoy it.
It also would be appreciated if Frank could provide a numerical review.
Steaphanie Von Essen
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Dododecapod
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Mar 5, 2005 |
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I wish I could rate this higher. It has great potential; the basic idea is very arousing. But somehow, it just doesn't make the grade, and it isn't easy to see exactly why.
The repeated references to the Baroness's ridiculously huge breasts detract from the flow; aside from the mental break visualizing such whoppers causes, the repeated use of the number/letter code distracts the reader.
The writing is relatively emotionless. I get no idea that the mistress is enjoying torturing the Baroness; and none that the Baroness is doing this for any reason other than to please her husband.
Finally, there is nothing new here, and no sex to titillate the reader and eroticize the bondage and torture.
Spelling and grammarwise, adequate but not exceptional. (6/10)
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Lord Douche
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Mar 2, 2005 |
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Good story :) Very different way of writing it, but well done. (8/10)
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