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One Trick Pony
Author: Sirius
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(Added on Jan 3, 2005)
(This month 62391 readers) (Total 96726 readers) |
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A centerfold model meets a mysterious individual who taunts her with his sexuality. She cannot avoid meeting him again only to fall under his spell and into sexual slavery. She is transported to another country where she not only continues to serve her master but learns that he is a NOC, an intelligence agent working to penetrate terrorist cells. He uses her as part of his cover and as a lure to the terrorists. You can only imagine what happens. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 25, 2009 |
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This story should have started with "Of all the bars in the world, she chose to walk into mine...", because the story has this "Casablanca" feel emanating from its writing style. Content is a completely different matter, of course, but still.
Excellently written tale.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 11, 2005 |
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great mix of everything (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Jan 19, 2005 |
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A bit slow off the starting blocks, but I like the direction that you're headed. I have to second chksng19's comment about over-use of "bee-stung". (9/10)
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Lord Douche
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Jan 14, 2005 |
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Really good start to the story! I hope for more to come soon (9/10)
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chksng19
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Jan 6, 2005 |
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A richly textured blend of ideas and events, promising better things come.
You almost lost me with the first sentence: entirely too close to "it was a dark and stormy night." I persisted, however, and enjoyed a good start.
One caution: be sparing in the use of phrases which are almost cliche. "Bee-stung lips" should be used sparingly; perhaps once each 1000 k of story. Maybe less. While such phrases can be descriptive on first use, readers tend to say, "yeah, yeah, I know. Bee stung. What else?" with such phrases if used too often.
I like your style; kept me in the story and wanting more. Nice job. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Jan 5, 2005 |
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a very, very promising beginning. more, please? (9/10)
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King Leopold
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Jan 5, 2005 |
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Very nice. I like the way the author drew the girl to man with intregue. I look forward to the next installment. (9/10)
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castle2001
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Jan 3, 2005 |
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Promising relationship. More. (10/10)
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