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Treasure Island
Author: Marshall Wade
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(Added on Dec 5, 2004)
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Go to a slave island and find, yeah, what? |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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Liked it. Hard to feel sympathetic towards John, tho. Okay, so that's not needed, but it would have helped to find the adventure more appealing.
JJ (8/10)
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gnuman
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May 25, 2007 |
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This is my type of story. Great plot; lots of heavy bdsm; well written; and love. All parties come out ahead. (10/10)
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longrover
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Jan 4, 2005 |
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An enchanting premise, very well done! I feel bad giving it a 9, but I got lost in the paragraphs with several rounds of dialog. It was too hard to keep track of who was speaking. Great story! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Marshall Wade
(Edit) (Jan 5, 2005)
- Thank you for your kind praise.
I am aware that it at times does require some effort to follow the dialogue, not only in this but in my stories generally.
I could of course write: 'A said:' or 'said B' before or after every paragraph of speach, but find it rather tedious and generally spoiling the overall picture, so I'm afraid that readers will have to put of with my style of prose.
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| Reviewer:
Kingcodez
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Dec 26, 2004 |
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Probably one of the best storys I've ever read (The other is Captured Caroline). Great job and keep it coming. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Marshall Wade
(Edit) (Jan 5, 2005)
- What can I say but 'Thank you very much' and 'I shall do my very best'.
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Ruby
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Dec 12, 2004 |
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Clever ideas. You're off to a great start. Looking forward to more.
*** Marshall - you BIG tease...the reply can't hold your whole story. But the site can.
Or you can feel free to e-mail it to me at
ruby@vampirespet.com
Thanks for the sneak peek! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Marshall Wade
(Edit) (Dec 12, 2004)
- Thank you for your kind praise. It's rare, but very encouraging to hear from readers.
As a reward, the complete story follows below.
Yours
Marshall Wade
Treasure Island
Part one
I was born under a lucky star,
(Edited by webmaster Jinn: the review section is not a good place to hold the full story. The text is updated for your story.)
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| Reviewer:
Katherina
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Dec 11, 2004 |
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Love your story. Cant wait for next chapter - please hurry ;)
Love
Katherina (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Marshall Wade
(Edit) (Dec 12, 2004)
- Thank you for your kind praise, it is rare, but very encouraging to hear from readers.
As a reward, the complete story follows below.
Yours
Marshall Wade
Treasure Island
Part one
I was born under a lucky star,
(Edited by webmaster Jinn: the review section is not a good place to hold the full story. The text is updated for your story.)
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| Reviewer:
littleslut
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Dec 6, 2004 |
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a wonderful start i cant wait for more! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Marshall Wade
(Edit) (Dec 12, 2004)
- Thank you for your kind praise. It's all too rare, but very encouraging to hear from readers.
As a reward, the complete story follows below.
Yours
Marshall Wade
Treasure Island
Part one
I was born under a lucky star,
(Edited by webmaster Jinn: the review section is not a good place to hold the full story. The text is updated for your story.)
- Replied by:
littleslut
(Edit) (Dec 14, 2004)
- Oh what a tease!!
please i would love to read the rest of it my email addy is d_r_a_0_4 AT yahoo DOT co DOT uk
Yours respectfully
littleslut
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