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Seven Nights
Author: jaeangel
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(Added on Dec 3, 2004)
(This month 58590 readers) (Total 80153 readers) |
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Seven girls are living in a modern castle, slaves to a rich man's cruel whims. He wants them to provide dinner entertainment, and to make it amusing he decides to punish his slaves for their sins. Which girl will be punished for which sin? Find out! |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 25, 2009 |
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Very intense story. Very well written also. I was especially thrilled at the piercing session. Amazing.
JJ (9/10)
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Mothbrad
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May 1, 2005 |
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Just for a change, I'm late to the party, but I wanted to put in my comment about this enjoyable story. Firstly, I enjoyed it a heck of a lot more than I did the movie 'Seven'; secondly, I thought the shorter length worked quite well as it didn't drag on for two long; and lastly, I've set aside this afternoon to read your other stories here, and I think I'm in for a fun one :) (8/10)
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- Replied by:
jaeangel
(Edit) (May 1, 2005)
- I'm glad you enjoyed it!The short length was due to this having been written for the 3rd Story Challenge on this site (I got a fourth place finish)and the word limit was 6,000 or less. I hope you like my other stories on here, and oh, one thing; you might see headers for my story 'Hell To Heaven' on here, but there's no story attached; it's because a publisher has published it and asked me to remove it from the site. You can get a copy at www.a1adultebooks.com or www.bdsmbooks.com. Reactions so far have been decidedly positive, and even a few of my mainstream friends have liked it, so if you decide to pick it up I think you'll enjoy it!
Thanks for reading, and especially for reviewing!!!
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Feb 19, 2005 |
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A very enjoyable read. Great story, very inventive punishments to fit each "crime". If anything it seemed a tad overly ambitious for a story limited to 6,000 words. Still you did great I would have placed you in 2nd or 3rd place. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jaeangel
(Edit) (Feb 19, 2005)
- Thank you! I actually didn't think it would even have placed...but I'm my own worst critic. And you're right about it being a tad ambitious; I am actually considering making this an 'expansion' story, going into more detail about how they got there and what life there is like when the slaves aren't serving as dinner entertainment. However, at the moment I'm currently wrapped up in a LOT of writing projects right now, and the expansion story is only in the planning stages. But if you liked this, keep an eye out for it sometime in the future!
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| Reviewer:
Kira
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Jan 9, 2005 |
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I completely agree with the other reviewer.
great story. Nice stuff. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
jaeangel
(Edit) (Jan 10, 2005)
- Thank you! I really appreciate your kind words, and the high rating! I hope all my stories meet with your approval!
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Sui Lerua
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Dec 9, 2004 |
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Excellent. This was hot stuff, and well told. Might have been the winner if I were judging. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
jaeangel
(Edit) (Jan 10, 2005)
- Thank you for the compliment! I'm very flattered!
I didn't even think I had chance to place, much less win anything...so a 4th place finish was a complete surprise, as is the '10' you gave me! Thank you, and I hope all my stories meet your expectations!
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Ruby
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Dec 6, 2004 |
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Ouch! Seven nights of pain! I didn't agree with all the punishments, but they were very creative. Another great story from a wonderful story teller. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jaeangel
(Edit) (Jan 10, 2005)
- Thank you! I tried to be creative. Sorry i didn't get to this review sooner; I'd almost forgotten it was posted! I personally don't think I'm really that good, but...I'm my own worst critic!
Thanks for reading, and especially for reviewing!
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