|
|
|
|
|
Cold
Author: Terri Madison
|
| |
(Added on May 7, 2001)
(This month 54688 readers) (Total 74911 readers) |
| |
Jessica and Jennifer's car breaks down on an extremely cold night. They accept a ride with two men who tell them to 'put out or get out'. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 5 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
40% |
60% |
0% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
| Highest
Rating: (9/10) |
| Lowest
Rating: (8/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Zubisco
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Sep 11, 2005 |
| |
Terrific story, forced sex and moral dilemmas. (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 24, 2004 |
| |
great, but all your stories are (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Hawke
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Sep 28, 2003 |
| |
"Cold": a story of a breed which does not seem to be dominant on the internet. The storyline is basic-two girls in a stalled car get picked up by two horny guys that take advantage of the weather conditions to bend them to their will. A usual storyline.
Not to say that storyline takes away from the quality of the story. After all, with the increasing number of internet fiction floating around, how can anyone develop a brand new, never-before-seen story? Exactly. It is the psychological aspects of this story that make it such a good read. It isn't too long, but it crams numerous disturbing concepts into a descriptive three pages of two girls being tormented. The fact that one girl must choose between two things (neither of which she wants) really gives the reader something to think about, and the ending paragraph, although abrupt, packs a punch so well illustrated that the reader will be thinking about it for quite some time thereafter. As for adding to the story, I wouldn't recomment it. The way this story ends is perfect, in my opinion, and I don't think that lengthening the adventures of Jessica and Jennifer would make the story a better quality.
-hawke (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
DaveH
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Dec 1, 2002 |
| |
Fantastic story! An excellent premise, and extremely well written. The snow/cold idea works well, as it is forced sexuality not based on ropes/chains/bondage but temperature! A novel concept, and a great story, hope to see it continue!
(9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
RubbrSpatula
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 23, 2002 |
| |
This is a great read. The ending come a bit abruptly, but, whew! If you like the moral delimma of the smarter of two victims being forced to make painful choices for the both of them, start reading my nonsense and read COLD! (8/10)
|
|
|
About 