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First Night
Author: Michelle Byssom
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(Added on Nov 5, 2004)
(This month 62972 readers) (Total 92527 readers) |
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Sally, a woman in her mid 30s has been kidnapped and sold as a slave. This is the account of her first night as she tries to come to terms with her new life. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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Interesting little tale, with a slightly intriguing main character, Sally.
Pace and structure are good, just a pity, like so often, that the story seems to have been forgotten about by the writer.
JJ (8/10)
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nikita
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Nov 29, 2005 |
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Please add the additional chapters. Reading this rich appetizer calls for a fine glass of wine and the rest of the meal. (9/10)
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longrover
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Nov 14, 2004 |
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When I read the first chapter, I took the title at face value and thought it was over. Now that I knowit is not, it has a lot of promise. Sally is an interesting character. Letting her tell her story as thought might be interesting, and it will definitely be interesting to see how the tale develops. Very well written; the rating is for its unfinished state. (8/10)
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LordVetinari
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Nov 12, 2004 |
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Interesting. I found it a bit odd that she could so completely set aside her old life, but that was part of its somewhat quirky charm. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Michelle Byssom
(Edit) (Nov 12, 2004)
- Hi LordVetinari. Thank you for your kind words. About the oddity - perhaps its a case of life getting in the way of art! I think you'll find that a woman in that situation is going to try very hard to make the best of her deal although I see that in fiction she really ought to put up more of a fight!
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Ruby
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Nov 7, 2004 |
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Very well done. Couldn't put the story out of my head. Believable and erotic. (10/10)
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Engineer
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Nov 6, 2004 |
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Excellent!! Dense, highly erotic, one would nearly believe the story for real. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Nov 6, 2004 |
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An outstanding piece. Short and quick, but the whole story none-the-less. Not blatant, not rough, but erotic anyway. Very well written! (10/10)
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