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Pat and the Cold Room Author: asbjorn
(Added on Oct 29, 2004) (This month 50588 readers) (Total 60778 readers)
A couple on the edge, negotiating a breakup, goes down a chilling path. An object lesson in working it out. Or not.

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Weighed Average (?): (8/10)
Average Rating: (8.5/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: Shibari (Edit) Rating: Oct 28, 2010
Nice build-up. Extremely well written and very erotic. HOT, not cold! (10/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Aug 22, 2005
very well done, a nice change to read something like this (9/10)
Replied by: asbjorn (Edit) (Aug 22, 2005)
Thanks for the kind words. I had planned a sequel, based on an incident that happened a year or so later, but the two people I sent a synopsis to never replied, so perhaps it was a little too much. In any case, this is not a popular story, too realistic I'm afraid. I did have a good time looking through your reviews, and reading the tens. Have never managed a ten on this site. Ah well.

Reviewer: kaleun76 (Edit) Rating: May 1, 2005
Very good! Hot, or perhaps cold?
I hope there's more (9/10)

Reviewer: jbowler65 (Edit) Rating: Nov 13, 2004
A very chilling story! (8/10)

Reviewer: LordVetinari (Edit) Rating: Oct 31, 2004
Interesting reading. Definitely worth a second look. Good work! (7/10)

Reviewer: bisarah (Edit) Rating: Oct 30, 2004
Damn ... i am cold after reading that one!!! Good job!! (8/10)

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