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Role Playing III - Raven and the Inquisitor
Author: sarijak
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(Added on Sep 11, 2004)
(This month 54862 readers) (Total 69699 readers) |
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It's a hot night, and Becky's at work, leaving Holly to her own devices. The beautiful Raven Iwasaki is tied up and tortured, suffering all the torments Holly's inventive mind can come up with. Will Holly last until Becky comes home? Will Becky be too tired to play? And will Raven be able to survive the faceless and cruel Inquisitor? |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Apr 13, 2010 |
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This story was HOT just like the night poor Holly got herself all worked up. And of course any typos or bad grammar are due to being all hot and bothered. ;-) (10/10)
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25toLife
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Very nicely done! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lord Douche
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Sep 14, 2004 |
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Great story! Very enjoyable ending, too :)
It reminded me of my own... experiences whilst writing. No self bondage, but, well, you get the idea ;) (9/10)
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BruceCC
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Sep 14, 2004 |
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Long intense build-up with an even more intense release at the end of the story. A worthy edition to the 'Role Playing' series. Can't wait for the next installment (hint, hint). (10/10)
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mkemse
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Sep 13, 2004 |
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was an enjoyable read (7/10)
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