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The Pain and Pleasure Journals Author: Estaban Bacca
(Added on Aug 11, 2004) (This month 68947 readers) (Total 89606 readers)
The training journals kept by a young woman in search of total submission.

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Weighed Average (?): (8.5/10)
Average Rating: (9/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: jbowler65 (Edit) Rating: Oct 19, 2004
Well written and enjoyable. It's unfortunate that it seems to have ended early. (8/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Oct 3, 2004
HOT,HOT,HOT (9/10)
Replied by: EstabanBacca (Edit) (Oct 4, 2004)
The replicated conciseness of this review is much appreciated.

Reviewer: Mobius (Edit) Rating: Aug 13, 2004
outstanding. Last time I read a story like this was with stephionies new life. Please keep going you have my interest. (10/10)
Replied by: EstabanBacca (Edit) (Oct 4, 2004)
Thank you for taking the time to review this work. Glad that it was of interest.

Reviewer: lex ludite (Edit) Rating: Aug 12, 2004
I have some serious issues with this one. It is linear in the extreme, there is no surprise or shock to anything that his cliched heroine endures. Let's face it, there are just so many basic plots in this field. What separates the wheat from the chaff are the conceits, those little differences that are slighty unique. For example, what kind of a story could this be if the woman was very much older, or very much younger? How would a religious fanatic handle this discipline? Suppose the master was a relative, perhaps even her father? I could go on, but the author knows what I'm talking about.So far there is nothing that separates this one from hundreds of others, except for the excellent writing, which is not to be sneezed at. However the author has to give me something better than a perfect copy of an old masterpiece to keep this reader interested. In passing, my rating does not conform to the comments that go with the number given. (7/10)
Replied by: EstabanBacca (Edit) (Aug 13, 2004)
Journals and diaries are time lines and therefore, irrevocably, linear in the extreme. It was a unique tone of thought running through what was sent me which intrigued me to rewrite and publish her journal. This is not a story, it is the spiced up record of a masochistic sex addict's alleged experiences. She is indeed, as is stated in the prologue, ultra typical. I have no doubt many of the jaded aficionados who frequent the library will find both her and her ordeals somewhat boring. Whereas others will catch that unique feeling that I think runs through this journal.

Reviewer: Camille (Edit) Rating: Aug 12, 2004
Mr. Bacca has managed to do it again. I was drawn into the story right from the first paragraph. Whether true or not, the journal is compelling and graphic. I give it a 10..I can't wait to read the next sessions. Hurry! (10/10)
Replied by: EstabanBacca (Edit) (Aug 12, 2004)
Thank you for taking the time to post a review.

Reviewer: Lord Douche (Edit) Rating: Aug 11, 2004
Very nice story, Estaban. I'm disappointed though... you breezed over the second enema!
LD (8/10)
Replied by: EstabanBacca (Edit) (Aug 11, 2004)
Were it not for the fact that I am following her diaries as closely as possible, enemas would never be mentioned. I find describing them less than erotic and more than distasteful.

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