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Driven by Craving
Author: Humil Slut
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(Added on Jul 20, 2004)
(This month 398805 readers) (Total 676940 readers) |
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This is a fictious story of the craving of a humiliation slut, it is not intended to be sane or safe, as it is fiction. Please read it as such. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Boggart
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Oct 27, 2016 |
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I would have given this a 10 if it wasn't for the odd, 3rd person voice that the Master always used. It made him seem like an old-school Dom, and it was hard to imagine him as anything but a doddering old man. Towards the end, using T/they was annoying. Things like that work in a 2-way chat in a private setting. In a story, it is vastly out of place.
Really creative ideas though. Thanks for writing! (7/10)
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lisaduzblax
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Mar 5, 2010 |
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i loved it couldnt stop reading (9/10)
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BobbieCD
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Jan 9, 2010 |
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I love this story. It explores the deep psychology of the need for submission very well. I find humiliation stories, consensual and non-consensual very erotic. I wish you had written more of them.. but I understand, it's tough to write so well. (10/10)
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hh6
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Nov 12, 2007 |
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So glad that I found this story. Well written, made me want to hurt her more.
Thank you for your talent. (10/10)
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babygirl005
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Apr 19, 2007 |
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i loved it. Thanks for writing it. i would only wish that i could server my Master as well. (9/10)
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nikita
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Feb 14, 2006 |
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very good story. you neede a better proofreader in your earlier chptrs, but, it seems you got one later. you go girl.
sorry 4 typing this way. left arm in sling and using 1 finger (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Jan 17, 2006)
- Thank you for your kind words, i just got more diligent in the later chapters to proofread it. Hope you are feeling better soon.
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BDSgirl
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Sep 26, 2005 |
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the end at last. *sigh* i knew He wouldnt sell her, i just knew it!! i have loved this story from start to finish and looked for updates eagerly. well done!!
luv blu (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Sep 26, 2005)
- Thank you for your wonderful comments. i hope my intension not to have Him sell her wasn't too clearly telegraphed. Thank you again.
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BDSgirl
(Edit) (Sep 26, 2005)
- oh no, it was not that clear at all!! i am just a hopeless romantis and hope for the happy ending, lol, that was another reason i lurved it so much.lots of pain, humiliation, punishment everything, but, at the end, aaahhhh
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| Reviewer:
Authenticity
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Sep 7, 2005 |
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Well I must say I am newer to this site, but have wandered the net for some years. Have read and enjoyed many stories, This one I could not stop reading, though I did many times, as I forced Myself too.. Simply to prolong the enjoyment.. I was very pleased by the length, the character development, and the plot twists and turns. Found it to be completely engrossing and I was sorry to reach the last and most current chapter. I very much look forward to reading how the story continues, and want the Author to know, that it provided Me with many pleasurable moments, as well as a dark need for more. Excellent job, and to whomever it is that inspires you, they should count themselves lucky. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Sep 8, 2005)
- Thank you so very much for these kind words and for sharing your enjoyment of my story. It does my heart good. Thank you again.
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Aug 15, 2005 |
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Overall, a well written story. A bit of editing would have improved the errors in the story, though they were not distracting. The main critisism was the believability of the dogs. The anatomy of a human would not have allowed the dog's knot to keep them coupled, which you suggested they were. That, was a major error and one which you may wish to change. Otherwise, I enjoyed the story with the exception of the scatology, which I don't care for - I glossed over that stuff and did not consider it in my review or rating of this tale.
Update: This story has been improving and remains quite interesting and quite erotic. I upgraded my rating from 8 to 9. Personally, I would enjoy a bit more emotional suffering but then you should always keep your audience wanting.
Critisism: too many intallments beginning with "As she woke" or "As she lay" or similarly structured sentences. Perhaps a personal issue but I found it a bit disappointing to open a new chapter knowing how the first sentence was going to start. But that is my only gripe. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Mar 5, 2005)
- Thank you for the review. i am told that a dog's knot would allow them to be coupled, but i'm glad that you liked the story.
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Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Aug 22, 2005)
- Thank you for pointing the openings out, i had not really noticed that. i will try not to make such an opening in the future.
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H Dean
(Edit) (Aug 22, 2005)
- I wouldn't worry on it all that much. I think I may be the only one who noticed. Still, we don't want to be too predictable or our tales won't work. Keep it up, I am enjoying your ever growing tale.
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qwert
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Aug 2, 2005 |
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Even though this story is more extreme than I usually prefer, I found it kept my interest and made me want to finish it. Good job. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Aug 2, 2005)
- Thank you for your comments. I am glad that you enjoyed the story even with its extreme nature.
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qwert
(Edit) (Aug 3, 2005)
- I've just finished reading the extensions. This is becoming far too extreme for my tastes. (I don't like to tattoo or waste a good slave; I prefer to administer punishment). However, this is your story/fantasy/nightmare, and you have done a wonderful job of describing her despair at displeasing her master.
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Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Sep 25, 2005)
- Just wanted to let you know that i had never intended to have her Master sell her. It was all a huge mind fuck, why would someone who has trained a slave to be exactly what He wants get rid of them. Once again, i am glad that you enjoyed part of the story until it got too extreme.
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Romy
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Jul 28, 2005 |
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I LOVE this story. I have just read all of the chapters and I hope there are more to cum. Most extreme stories are too tame for my taste. This is excellent. I love the piss control and how far she will sink. I like the relationship between her and Master. Keep the chapters cumming. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Jul 28, 2005)
- Thank you very much for those wonderful comments. i am thrilled that you are enjoying the story so much.
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heycarrieanne
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Jul 26, 2005 |
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I really enjoyed the first of this story, but I am not sure I like how far down she allowed him to take her. (7/10)
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Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Jul 26, 2005)
- Thank you for your comments, i realize that my tastes do run to the extreme. Glad you enjoyed part of the story
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heycarrieanne
(Edit) (Sep 25, 2005)
- and they all lived happily ever after ...
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| Reviewer:
pejanon
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Jun 4, 2005 |
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you are close to writing a peniultimate ex humilation epic (not ultimate - no such thing)!
Do go on and mind the tempo please you are getting a bit slow... exelent! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Jun 5, 2005)
- Thank you for your comments, yes i did deliberately slow the tempo down some to try to establish more of a relationship between Master and slave, but it will pick back up some. Thank you again.
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Masterdesire
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May 28, 2005 |
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Once again a writer comes along and shows promise. I have and will continue reading this story. Makes me understand and feel . Real quality, a must read..( 9/10) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Jun 1, 2005)
- Thank you so much for your kind comments, am very pleased that you are enjoying the story. Thank you again.
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My Darkside
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Apr 29, 2005 |
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Lex Luther (Ludite) be damned - this is good stuff. Yes, there are some similarities to other humiliation/slave/stories - but the path from unfeeling freedom to total slavery is better understood and experienced in this series. Well done Humil Slut ... keep this series going!!!!!!!!
I need to go research what Lex thinks is good ... (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Humil_Slut
(Edit) (May 1, 2005)
- Thank you very much, am very pleased that you are enjoying the story. It seems to be growing on its own, each new chapter bringing up new ideas. Thank you again.
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subelly
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Apr 29, 2005 |
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Brilliant story and the build up is great, i really enjoyed it. A great understanding of female sub psyche and brilliantly executed (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Humil_Slut
(Edit) (May 1, 2005)
- Thank you for your kind comments. am honored when someone enjoys my stories. Thank you again.
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| Reviewer:
RhondaLee
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Apr 27, 2005 |
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I really enjoy the humiliation part of this story, very innovative idea. (10/10)
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Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Apr 27, 2005)
- Thank you very much, am really glad that you are enjoying the story.
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| Reviewer:
WackySpurtz
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Apr 2, 2005 |
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Well written but a little to crude for my tastes. (8/10)
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Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Apr 3, 2005)
- thank you for the review, i realize that my tastes are a bit extreme.
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| Reviewer:
compliant
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Feb 9, 2005 |
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This is a fantastic story. I hope humil Slut continues to write. (9/10)
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Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Feb 15, 2005)
- Thank you, am glad that you liked it.
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| Reviewer:
yossarian
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Feb 2, 2005 |
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My score for this story may be MARGINALLY skewed in favor of the very delectable authoress for personal reasons . It has provided delicious erotic fodder as well as a strange , twisted kind of intellectual stimulation , and quite a few interesting turns along the way so far.I think it has a little bit for everybody , quite the epic . Nicely done Humil_Slut , I look forward to more .. (10/10)
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Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Feb 15, 2005)
- (chuckling) Marginally skewed. Thank you.
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| Reviewer:
cloudyday
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Nov 21, 2004 |
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Humil Slut, i LOVED this story. i dont know that i have read anything that made me as aroused as this has. And i have to agree, the part where the Master asked her to be His slave made me melt. More please. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Feb 15, 2005)
- Thank you for this review, sorry it took me so long to reply. Am glad that you like the story.
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magicgrl
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Nov 15, 2004 |
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well, i guess that i am a twisted, sick mind! LOL
First, you write very well. i am a journalism major and i can barely stand to read things that are poorly written. i like educated and kinky folk!
i loved this story--i got hot when i read the great descriptions and the best part was when the Master asked her to be His slave--i CRIED! it was so perfect. i guess i can relate in many ways, as i had to go through a "testing" process. Certainly it was much less severe than this, but none-the-less when you want something so much it gives you great pleasure to know you have achieved it.
Anyway, fabulous story!
(9/10)
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Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Nov 16, 2004)
- Thank you very much, it is nice to meet another twisted sick mind (chuckling), and i am very pleased that you have enjoyed this story.
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| Reviewer:
spicym
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Nov 5, 2004 |
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I loved it (9/10)
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Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Nov 5, 2004)
- Am glad that you are enjoying it. Thank you.
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sissyslave
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Oct 18, 2004 |
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very exciting story ... can't wait to see what her new life will bring (9/10)
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Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Nov 5, 2004)
- Hope that you like the twists and turns that her new life will bring. Thank you for your comments.
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| Reviewer:
esclavadana
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Oct 17, 2004 |
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I too was turned on by your story. Go on, please! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Nov 5, 2004)
- Am very glad that my story has turned you on, is that not the point of erotica. Thank you for your comments and for taking the time to review my current story.
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learningtopleez
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Sep 21, 2004 |
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Oh my! How wet I am after reading this. I have not been on in a while and after reading this story was immediately hooked again. I felt myself so wanting to be the dog slut in this story...aching for what she was getting! Craving and needing to be used and humiliated. Well written Humil Slut! Please don't stop here! Give us more to crave! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Sep 22, 2004)
- Thank you very much for your comments, i'm bery glad that you are enjoying the story. Actually i had originally planned to end the story with the next chapter, but more ideas have come to mind, so this story has more life than i thought. Thank you again.
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SamiJo
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Aug 23, 2004 |
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Very good, I want to know who the guy is, it seems to be someone she may work with. Cant wait to read upcomeing chapters. (9/10)
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Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Aug 23, 2004)
- Thank you very much for this review, in the next chapter she finally gets to "meet" her Master.
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SamiJo
(Edit) (Aug 24, 2004)
- Look, I was somewhat correct....In the long run I was. I cant wait to read what else happens this weekend.
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sweetie00
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Jul 30, 2004 |
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Very humliating and gross. Such a turn on! Keep writing...what else will she do? Yikes! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Aug 2, 2004)
- Thank you for your review, am glad that you like the story.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 30, 2004 |
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very good so far, hope you add more to it, would love to see you holding an enema over night as a rimnder, a punishment for doing things wrong or to slow (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Aug 2, 2004)
- Thank you, i will be adding more, we will have to see about the enema (grinning).
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Jul 29, 2004 |
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An enjoyable fantasy humiliation story. It was fairly well written and we hope to see more in the future. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Jul 29, 2004)
- Thank you for your review, am glad that you are enjoying the story.
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Jul 24, 2004 |
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A nce little fantasy story. There are few errors in the typing, but overall good job! (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Jul 24, 2004)
- Thank you for your thoughts
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lex ludite
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Jul 22, 2004 |
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This one sounds like someone's personal fantasy, which is not a bad idea. The writing is acceptable, the proofing better than average, but not perfect, and the wording sometimes veers into the florid. Unfortunately this story does not have a shred of originality. It adds nothing to the body of literature dealing with this subject. Both the "master" and the "slut" are cliches. This one just does not play to this reader. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Humil_Slut
(Edit) (Jul 23, 2004)
- Thank you so much for this review, it is a shame that in a BDSM site, that the concept of Master and slave is considered a cliche. Silly me, I thought that is what BDSM stood for.
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bisarah
(Edit) (Jul 24, 2004)
- that was kind of cold, wasn't it? i thought stories were about what made one excited and if this made the author all hot and bothered, then why should you be offended?
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