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The Teton Mare
Author: Desperado
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(Added on May 2, 2004)
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The black mare appears from nowhere. Which is she - horse, girl? Both? Whichever she is, she carries the curse of the hills, a curse which ensnares the unlucky who will never forget the lust that the horse/girl incites. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Aurelius
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May 22, 2004 |
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High marks for treatment of the theme, writing style and eroticism. This is a beguiling short story that flows smoothly from the initial mystery, to the bondage and eroticism after the capture, and then to a wistful yearning ending. I found a completeness that belies its length. That to me is a hallmark of a successful short story. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
warriorblack
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May 8, 2004 |
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I liked it but agree with what Mitchcarson said. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Wmnwholves
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May 4, 2004 |
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A very well written story. I enjoyed the imaginary of the story and the I like the ending... The continual search for love... or lust whichever the case may be. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
MitchCarson
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May 4, 2004 |
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A well-paced and well-described yarn.
The internal tension in the primary character
was amply conveyed. I never felt really
excited by the tale, but then I wasn’t under
the curse either. I wanted to know a bit more
about the horse-girl, but I think that was part
of the author's plan. Good job.
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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May 3, 2004 |
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Sexy, and the dream-imagery effects and first-person style definitely add to the ambiance. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
kittenfemme
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May 3, 2004 |
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I enjoyed the lovely imagery. (8/10)
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