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Prom Week
Author: Omega Phallic
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(Added on Apr 19, 2004)
(This month 91388 readers) (Total 140334 readers) |
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The busty cock teasing girls at one unlucky high school finally get what they deserve during their Prom Week. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
prey4me
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Apr 30, 2010 |
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Ridiculous plot line. Sorry. Just too much obsession on excessively large teenage tits. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
25toLife
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Jul 4, 2007 |
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The idea is there, but there are just too many things wrong with this one. Spell check would definitely help. Having a background story might make the plot more believable. And PLEASE, 38FF is not a cup size. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
valhalla
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Apr 29, 2004 |
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Dear Omega,
Well.....let's see...what can I say?....not to put too fine a point on it,your story sucks.....a few pointers.....virgins don't usually lactate except in rare cases of hormonal imbalance.....and that slice of dough with cheese and toppings that the whole world relishes is called 'pizza',not 'piazza'. But all said and done,I admire your spirit;all that is needed,perhaps,is a stint back in the old grammar school.
(2/10)
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Apr 24, 2004 |
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While I enjoyed the idea of snotty high school girls gettin their cumuppance, as it were, the many errors in grammar, syntax, spelling etc make the story difficult to read, and generally it was not very credible. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
esclavadana
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Apr 21, 2004 |
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Awfully boring. There's no plot, no developement, only a very long series of fuckings and tortures. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 20, 2004 |
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ok but should have been much better based on the theme (6/10)
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Humiliator
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Apr 20, 2004 |
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The ideas are good. The quality is terrible. The characters are not believeable. Over all, a good first draft. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
stoneknight
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Apr 19, 2004 |
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this story is great. I love all these young rich hottie being truned into complete submissive cumsluts. that's why fantasy is so great you can write about nasty things you could never do in real life. (10/10)
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